Savitri: the Light of the Supreme
Re: Some aspects of Inspiration and Technique in the Poetry of Savitri
by RY Deshpande
The following comment by Arvind has been brought to the present post for further discussion. Please follow the thread here.
V. Arvind on Sun 02 May 2010 08:42 PM Just revisiting this very interesting point you raised two weeks ago:
Thread'ed through | clam'or ous | marts' and | sen'ti nel | tow'ers |
dactyl-dactyl-trochee-dactyl-trochee—all falling feet. We’ll have to hunt out if there are at all similar examples elsewhere in literature. I couldn't find anything that can be called a line of dactylic-trochaic pentameter in the internet. However, I chanced upon Sri Aurobindo's scansion of Swinburne's lines in the letters. Here is one. It is trochee-trochee-dactyle-trochee-trochee.
Āll thě | nīght slěep | cāme nŏt ŭ|pōn mў | ēyelĭd |
Also, isn't it the case that Sri Aurobindo's Ilion is dactylic hexameter, and the lines are mostly all dactylic-trochaic? Here is one line which I found already scanned in K.R. Srinivasa Iyengar's essay:
One' and un|armed' in the | car' was the | dri'ver; | grey' was he, | shrunk'en| It is dactyl-dactyl-dactyl-trochee-dactyl-trochee.
If we drop the third trochee we get the "threaded through" line scansion!
Here we should pursue some other pending comments by Vikas and Akash. The thread will continue on this post. ~ RYD
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